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Nice story buddy, seriously i have read some black clover fanfic but most are like asta x yuno or oc x asta, finally some nice stuff for cultural man like us . Yes, starting 3-4 chapters are pretty short but itβs all right, from than onwards author have done nice comeback with long chapters so πππ» from me ....
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one of the greatest fanfiction ever well if you ever happen to continue I'll be a daily reader of this story. if you ever happen to stumble upon this comment, please continue. And thank you bro,I really had a good time reading this story. And again thank you for everything.ππππ
one of the best fanfiction I've read thus far.and the story is fantastic in all way. The MC is super smart,op and super handsome and all of this makes the story a marvelous display of creativity. please make more chapters.
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this book has great potential when will the new release start pls write again plssssss i really like ur works its really great . gggh
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It is an enjoyable fan fiction. Although it doesnβt have much in the way of character development, it is a good read that you donβt have to think to much about.
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Have him end up looking like a silver haired mihawk since he grew up in a church and yeah lol idk would be cool but keep it up! One of my favorite black clover fanfics!
this is nice book, when i read.. i can enjoy this fanfic...and this fanfic easy to understand...and i like when asta handsome and badass..so i will recommended to people read this fanfic.. (*whisper_and i like genre haremοΌ Β΄βο½οΌ)
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You have written a pretty good fanfic and it has great potential.........don't ruin it......and I am hoping that you won't be influenced by other people's hatredπ π ...well keep up the good work....don't drop it....π
I like it get the witch queenπππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
I like it, the MC is not stupidly overpower( not yet anyway) but can still hand most people their azz, the MC is also at least sensible unlike the original Asta( I don't dislike Asta but it's can be kinda weird sometime). I hope the author just leave it at Haki+ swordsmanship and his anti magic without any devil fruit power come into the equation, it would be too one piece then. I look forward to the MC fight against the devils and the dark triad, thank for your hard-work, author.
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it's a great story you make. you make asta more baddas with the way you give him a skill which he can to send a sowrd slash with the anti magic. so it's give him more chance to be more volatile in the fighting an opponent
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Donβt be fooled with 5-stars reviews. Thereβre some grammar mistakes, which are really annoying, like he donβt, he plan and etc. The story has just started and so far, itβs been updating constantly. Thereβre some time-skips, but theyβre rushed. Character design is awful: if you donβt know Black clover, you will be struggling, because the author doesnβt describe them properly. World background is ****ty: just a copy paste chapter before the story. I wouldnβt recommend you this novel.
This story has a great potential.... You have done fine charachar development. Just keep working hard without listening to any haters. I look forward to more chapters
Nice story buddy, seriously i have read some black clover fanfic but most are like asta x yuno or oc x asta, finally some nice stuff for cultural man like us . Yes, starting 3-4 chapters are pretty short but itβs all right, from than onwards author have done nice comeback with long chapters so πππ» from me ....
please continue π i'm getting hyped up! Illllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll Illllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll Illllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll Illllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll Illllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll Illllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll Illllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
one of the greatest fanfiction ever well if you ever happen to continue I'll be a daily reader of this story. if you ever happen to stumble upon this comment, please continue. And thank you bro,I really had a good time reading this story. And again thank you for everything.ππππ
one of the best fanfiction I've read thus far.and the story is fantastic in all way. The MC is super smart,op and super handsome and all of this makes the story a marvelous display of creativity. please make more chapters.
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this book has great potential when will the new release start pls write again plssssss i really like ur works its really great . gggh
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Nice story ππππ keep goingπ€©π€©ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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Reveal Spoiler I am the soul of my account Exp is my body and coin is my blood I have created countless reviews Unaware of the congruity, Nor aware of the quality Withstood critics to create reviews, waiting for one's acceptance I have no shame. This is the easiest way My whole life was Unlimited Useless Previews
It is an enjoyable fan fiction. Although it doesnβt have much in the way of character development, it is a good read that you donβt have to think to much about.
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Reveal Spoiler Update soon please !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!#!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!#!###!!######################### Jhhgfryhjjjfdbjhujhfdrthjuygddezfxfuydyuhcfg?fhg8yygxcxfijggffghuhgsr6uyfssryyhjhfffdttyyy
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Have him end up looking like a silver haired mihawk since he grew up in a church and yeah lol idk would be cool but keep it up! One of my favorite black clover fanfics!
this is nice book, when i read.. i can enjoy this fanfic...and this fanfic easy to understand...and i like when asta handsome and badass..so i will recommended to people read this fanfic.. (*whisper_and i like genre haremοΌ Β΄βο½οΌ)
Reveal Spoiler You have written a pretty good fanfic and it has great potential.........don't ruin it......and I am hoping that you won't be influenced by other people's hatredπ π ...well keep up the good work....don't drop it....π
I like it get the witch queenπππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
I like it, the MC is not stupidly overpower( not yet anyway) but can still hand most people their azz, the MC is also at least sensible unlike the original Asta( I don't dislike Asta but it's can be kinda weird sometime). I hope the author just leave it at Haki+ swordsmanship and his anti magic without any devil fruit power come into the equation, it would be too one piece then. I look forward to the MC fight against the devils and the dark triad, thank for your hard-work, author.
Reveal Spoiler it's a great story you make. you make asta more baddas with the way you give him a skill which he can to send a sowrd slash with the anti magic. so it's give him more chance to be more volatile in the fighting an opponent
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MORE!!~PLZ!!~ ...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................140!!!
Very good update fastet...... Make him haremππππππππππ πππ€ππππ πππ πππ π€π πππ€βΊπ€πππππ€π€ππ€π€π€βΊβΊπππ€π€π€ππππ€ππππ
Donβt be fooled with 5-stars reviews. Thereβre some grammar mistakes, which are really annoying, like he donβt, he plan and etc. The story has just started and so far, itβs been updating constantly. Thereβre some time-skips, but theyβre rushed. Character design is awful: if you donβt know Black clover, you will be struggling, because the author doesnβt describe them properly. World background is ****ty: just a copy paste chapter before the story. I wouldnβt recommend you this novel.
This story has a great potential.... You have done fine charachar development. Just keep working hard without listening to any haters. I look forward to more chapters